Opinion about which wording sounds the least clumsy...

College Essays
1

I’m starting my essay with something along the lines of:

“On the morning of July 4th,…”
“On Independence Day morning,…”
“On the morning of Independence Day,…”
“On July 4th morning,…”

This is a really small, quite unimportant question in the scheme of things, but it’s really bothering me and I would like to hear some opinions if you guys have any lol. Thanks!

2

I’d go with the first one, unless it’s very important to the essay that July 4th is Independence Day.

3

First one.

4

I agree - the first one.

5

Yep, agree with everyone else.

6

Definitely the first.

7

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