<p>Not much time to post, but midthread so far I saw someone grappling with how much of the essay to devote to “explaining” away the lower part of the lopside.</p>
<p>If this helps: our D, who had super-high verbal everything and not-hot math anythings (both standardized tests and courses, consistent lopsided since Middle School). She was so lopsided it jumped off the page. </p>
<p>What she did was choose colleges where there was some chance for a strategy to deal with this through coursework. Then she mentioned – in ONE SENTENCE and not the whole essay. She did a "why I chose this college to apply to… (their prompt) and in one sentence owned her math badside (“As you can see from my scores and transcript…”). She didnt explain or angst over it, either. Just assume the committee sees what’s in front of them. </p>
<p>THEN (second half of that sentence) she said how she planned to take some of their quantitative courses to meet their grad requirements. She didn’t pretend she’d become something she wasn’t. That school particular school had a Q (quantitative) distribution in some courses called things like “Math in Architecture” and “Math in Music” and she thought through her entire 15-point distribution to show she could graduate. And that she appreciated those course-offerings. (Noteworthy: when in college she was sure to lighten up her credit load the terms she took the actual Math department course so she could handle it. She really planned her schedule aroudn the lopsidedness, and flourished in her strength areas – does, still).</p>
<p>She had more colleges on her list where she perceived similar ways through her weakness area and said how she Would address it at Their college. That was done in a sentence, and folded into a long essay about her strength areas which she also said how she’d develop them at Their college. (Later in college she was diagnosed with a full-blown learning disability, but at app time had no idea that was behind any of this. She was compensating on math/science all her life by relying on her verbal/creative/social strengths; Water under the bridge…) </p>
<p>I think: own the problem and act like you’re aware. Nobody’s fooled. By figuring out a Strategy to get through, while at college keyed into their college, the student sounds smarter, capable and aware of both strengths/weaknesses. Just 1-2 sentences on addressing weakness, not a whole essay and hopefully not even a whole paragraph. The rest of personal essay: all strengths! And not a “platitude”, rah-rah, self-pitying or self-excusing sentence – rather, a real practical approach, keyed off of their course catalogue, to get through. Show you know, appreciate them, mention it’s part of your plan to succeed. BRIEFLY (unlike my post…when i’m in a hurry i post too long).</p>
<p>Essays help for lopsiders. Based on numbercrunching alone, D;s stratospheric verbal skills were wiped out by her always-low math marks (standardized testing and transcripts alike). Therefore, those colleges that read essays with care, and prize “fit” are helpful. My advice might be to others: key into some smaller sized but higher-ranked LAC’s (top 30-100 but not top 1-30 LAC’s…just grasping for numbers here, no science behind it). The big universities that might rule out based on numbers before they get to readng any essay might not be your friend here. Think of this from ground-up, as you develop your list.</p>