<p>I have just finished my common app essay and I desparetely need someone to critique. Can you please pm me. Thank you so much!</p>
<p>Send it to me by PM.</p>
<p>thank you marite for your comments. I have revised my essay and feel that it is more appropriate etc? Do you think you can critique it once more? THank you. </p>
<p>Can any other parents please evaluate my essay? Thank you</p>
<p>bump</p>
<p>Please parents I am desperate for replies. Thank you.</p>
<p>I would help you, but I am not a parent unfortunately.</p>
<p>If you want to me to read it, I can. PM me.</p>