<p>Would anyone like to read my Vassar Essay and critique it and help me improve it?</p>
<p>"What aspects of Vassar do you find appealing?"</p>
<p>I would obviously would not like my essay to be taken and used by someone else, so I want to only get help from "experienced" member of this forum. I'm not being cynical, just careful.</p>
<p>Thank you.</p>