<p>Can someone please critique the **** out of this before i send it</p>
<p>No joke </p>
<p>I want your honest opinion please. It means a lot - is all or nothing.</p>
<p>Can someone please critique the **** out of this before i send it</p>
<p>No joke </p>
<p>I want your honest opinion please. It means a lot - is all or nothing.</p>