Personal Statement

Would anyone be willing to read my personal statement essays. I am trying to ask around others bc ik my family told me they are good, but idk if that was just because they were trying to be encouraging. I already sent my application, but I have become a little nervous over the last couple of weeks for my admissions decisions. If you are interested, comment below and I can pm u the essays, and I would appreciate any kind of response. Thanks

I will volunteer. Although I did not get my admission notification yet, I did get the supplemental questionnaire. I also helped my sister get into UC San Diego by editing her personal statements, and she did the same for me for the UCs I applied to (Berkeley, Davis, Los Angeles, & San Diego).