Please, a set of eyes for my last-minute Bard supplement essay?

[paint_me_purple]

<p>It was very rushed, but I'd appreciate any criticism. Any takers?</p>

[voilaJ]

<p>Sure, PM me.</p>

[paint_me_purple]

<p>Thanks, sent!!
Anyone else? Pwetty pwease?</p>

[ariana2010]

<p>I’ll check it out if you’re still looking for help Will you check out my post and leave feedback?? Thanks :D</p>

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[pumpkins]

<p>I’ll take a look at yours. Please look over mine-mine was also a last minute.</p>