please critique my summer program application short answers !

<p>hi i wrote like a 2 1/2 page response to questions can you read it ^_^</p>

<p>it's for a very selective summer program</p>

<p>Sure, I don't mind taking a look at your writing. PM?</p>

<p>I'd be glad to look at it. PM if you want.</p>

<p>sure i can help u. PM if u would like</p>

<p>I would like to help to. just PM me! I love giving opinions about people's writing.</p>

<p>sure just PM it over...</p>

<p>I'd like to help if it's not for TASP. Just PM me.</p>

<p>sure, i wouldn't mind. pm</p>

<p>me too! I never get to read anything lol! but I would like to!</p>

<p>Of course I would.... pm it over yo.</p>