Please help cut down my essay? (Over word limit)

College Essays
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<p>It's way over the word limit and I'm not sure if some ideas are connected effectively. Would anyone like to offer me advice? </p>

<p>I would appreciate critique from people who aren't in high school as well.</p>

<p>I would be glad to read any writing if anyone would like.</p>

<p>Thank you so much.</p>

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<p>Send it over, I’ll take a look. Do you mind reading over mine as well?</p>

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<p>I’ll be happy to help you. I’m a working professional who has volunteered helping students with college planning and essays.</p>