Please Help!!!! Essay/personal statement

<p>Can someone please read my essay/personal statement and help me critique it? Please feel free to include any comments or improvements! Thank you!</p>

<p>Sure thing dude… but for the record , there’s a thread of consolidated essay-readers , like you need to be careful who you share it with</p>

<p>PM me, my post history will show that I’ve already graduated.</p>