<p>I cant pm anyone because im new but ill email you if you pm your address! any help is appreciated . I cant send this without a second set of eyes looking at them first. Im terrible with punctuation and I feel like my paragraphs and flow of ideas may be off. Please let me know !</p>
<p>I will help you! I have sent you my email. Can you also read my UIUC essay?</p>
<p>Yeah ill read yours! thanks for the help</p>