<p>I need some help proofreading an essay I wrote. My parents aren't too solid in the English department and I'd like some advice on how to improve my essay.</p>
<p>I think my topic could fit under either of the essay options-</p>
<p>Essay A Tell us about an experience which, at the time, really felt like "the end of the world" -- but had it not happened, you would not be who you are today. Describe the process through which you discovered value in the negative.</p>
<p>Essay B Describe the world you come from, for example your family, clubs, school, community, city, or town. How has that world shaped your dreams and aspirations?</p>
<p>Any help would be GREATLY appreciated!</p>