Please help... Writing q's

<p>Some writing q's that I need help with.</p>

<p>Which one is better and why?
During the summer months, several thousand people a day visit the park, which is known for its waterfalls and rock formations.
Several thousand people a day visit the part during the summer months known for its waterfalls and rock formations.</p>

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Maya Madera [proudly] wore her sister's [most popular invention, a watch] for winter campers [that flashes the temperature in] lighted numerals and sends out a loud alarm when [pressing a button.] </p>

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In neighborhoods throughout the United States, one can encounter hundreds of different rope-jumping games, [........]
-each with its own rules
-each having their own rules</p>

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<p>This is better.</p>

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<p>This one places “known for its water falls and rock formations” too far away from the clause’s antecedent, park. It sounds like it’s the summer months that are known for [their] waterfalls and, well, that doesn’t make sense. And notice the their I placed in brackets; months are plural so if any attributes were to follow, the correct pronoun would have to be “their.”</p>

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<p>That makes it sound like the watch is pressing a button. It should be “when a button [on the watch] is pressed”</p>

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<p>“Each” follows its antecedent, so in this case, the possessive pronoun would have to agree with the plural “rope-jumping games.”</p>

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I pretty sure each is singular so shouldn’t it be A. Each with its own rules?</p>

<p>Each is singular when used in a “each of [plural noun]” sense. In other words, when it acts as a pronoun</p>

<p>Each of the cows weighS over 30 tons.
Each costs a million bucks</p>

<p>When it follows its antecedent, the verb has to agree with each’s antecedent. In structures like that, each becomes an adjective. The sentence in the OP is of this type of structure.</p>

<p>The cows weigh 31 tons each.
The shoes cost a million bucks each.
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The shoes each cost a million bucks.</p>

<p>I disagree with antonioray. “each with its own rules” should be the answer because “each” as a pronoun is always singular, and “its” must agree with that singularity. “each” is not being used adjectively there; it is being used as a pronoun. (Also, in antonioray’s final example sentences, “each” is being used as an adverb, not as an adjective.)</p>

<p>For support, I offer this analogous excerpt from a reputable source:</p>

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<p>From Bosnian, Croatian, Serbian, a Grammar: with Sociolinguistic Commentary.</p>

<p>Silverturtle, what about the sentence</p>

<p>The rooms each have their own beds.</p>

<p>Each is modifying rooms and not “have.”</p>

<p>In my last example, each is modifying shoes and not “cost.” How can it?</p>

<p>From Webster’s Grammar, Usage, and Punctuation</p>

<p>“When the adjective each follows a plural subject, the verb agrees with the subject: The rooms each have seperate thermostats.” (lifted verbatim)</p>

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<p>I might agree that the OP’s sentence indeed uses “each” as a pronoun b/c I didn’t notice the comma the first time around, but I’m not sure yet.</p>

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<p>No, “each” is in fact modifying “have.”</p>

<p>Here is an example of the adverbial form of “each” taken from the Random House Dictionary:</p>

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<p>EDIT: re post 8</p>

<p>Source please? I’m not perverse; I’m just going by what’s in front of me (i.e., the Webster guide).</p>

<p>And this:</p>

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<p>[Each</a> | Define Each at Dictionary.com](<a href=“http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/each]Each”>EACH Definition & Usage Examples | Dictionary.com)</p>

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<p>This sentence is not relevant; “we” presents an exception:</p>

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<p>From the American Heritage Dictionary (also at the above link).</p>

<p>Updated post 10, and</p>

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The “exception” still holds we as the subject and each still carries “have.”</p>

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<p>wsu.edu supra</p>

<p>What exactly are we debating right now? :slight_smile: My only uncertainty at the moment is in distinguishing between the adjectival and adverbial forms of “each” (the sources seem to offer differing thoughts on this), a matter which does not seem to be of any applicable purpose.</p>

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  1. each is sometimes used as an adjective
  2. The rooms each have… uses “each” as an adjective and not as an adverb modifying “have.”
  3. …shoes each cost… could be rewritten as "each of the shoes costS; when it follows a plural noun, each carries a plural verb (not making this up, just reciting Webster’s and Alfred et al.)</p>

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<p>I don’t doubt that (e.g., “Each dog is cold.”).</p>

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<p>Your earlier example sentences supposedly of “each” as an adjective are in fact of “each” as an adverb:</p>

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<p>It seems that when “each” immediately succeeds the subjective noun, it is considered an adjective; but when it more nearly succeeds the verb, it is an adverb. So in your “room” sentence, “each” is indeed an adjective. In any case, correctly labeling whether it is being used as an adverb or adjective should not affect subject-verb agreement. </p>

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<p>Yes.</p>

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<p>When “each” is an adjective, yes.</p>

<p>Returning to the question that prompted this, I stand by my initial response that “each” is a pronoun there and, thus, that all agreement must be singular.</p>

<p>Yes I glossed over the comma. Silverturtle is right in post 17.

I’m wrong on that one too. Not too good at making up sentences.</p>

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But this one is right, right?</p>

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<p>Yes, that is definitely correct. “each” seems to be acting as an adjective there.</p>

<p>I am sure some people may still be somewhat confused.</p>

<p>CORRECT: In neighborhoods throughout the United States, one can encounter hundreds of different rope-jumping games, each with its own rules.</p>

<p>“Each” is a component of “hundreds of different rope-jumping games.” It is singular.</p>

<p>CORRECT: The street has two very differently sized houses, one with three bathrooms and the other with one bathroom.</p>

<p>“One” is a component of “two very differently sized houses.” It is singular.</p>