<p>I was wondering if anyone would be willing to rate my college essay, I will be using it for one of the Questbridge application essays and I will also shorten it to use for the College App. Please give me an email address so I can email it to you or if you would rather, just email me at <a href="mailto:dodovskirby@yahoo.com">dodovskirby@yahoo.com</a> to ask me for it that way. Thank you!</p>
<p>I’m sorry, I’m new to here, I could just message it if that is easier.</p>
<p>Message it to me, I’ll give my feedback :)</p>
<p>If you still want another perspective, I’d be glad to read it.</p>