Please read and critique my essay!

College Essays
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<p>This is my first personal essay and I don't know it is relevant or not. suggest</p>

2

<p>bUMP…does anyone want to read it?</p>

3

<p>I love to read it. PM me</p>

4

<p>I’ll read it.</p>

5

<p>I can read it.</p>

6

<p>I can read it!</p>

7

<p>I can help you edit it. PM me.</p>

8

<p>I’ll read it :)</p>

9

<p>bump any seniors?</p>

10

<p>i’ll read it</p>

11

<p>I can read, if need be</p>

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<p>I can read it!</p>