Please read and critique my essay!

[ameetbh123]

<p>This is my first personal essay and I don't know it is relevant or not. suggest</p>

[ameetbh123]

<p>bUMP…does anyone want to read it?</p>

[gotadream]

<p>I love to read it. PM me</p>

[grao2014]

<p>I’ll read it.</p>

[halcyonheather]

<p>I can read it.</p>

[Careful]

<p>I can read it!</p>

[starchow]

<p>I can help you edit it. PM me.</p>

[ilovelifewow]

<p>I’ll read it :)</p>

[ameetbh123]

<p>bump any seniors?</p>

[qt314aaa]

<p>i’ll read it</p>

[withtheflow]

<p>I can read, if need be</p>

[roxy481]

<p>I can read it!</p>