please read my essay =D

[segjk642]

<p>can someone read over my essay? any feedback will be appreciated =)
thanks very muchh</p>

[bananapancakes]

<p>I'll read yours if you'll read mine... pm me</p>

[Thanatos5142]

<p>PM it to me</p>

[tako]

<p>Sure, I'd love to!</p>