Please someone proof read my personal statement. I promise it'll be interesting.

I really need someone to proof read my personal statement by today because I am planning on submitting my UC app by tonight.

First Prompt is about how my mother has been my home since I have lived in 4 continents, 3 countries, and 11 different cities.

Second Prompt is about how I have hardships throughout my life because of the fact that I had to move so much due to my step father being in the military.

I promise these essays are interesting!

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