Please tell me what you think about my College Resume?

Applying to College Common and Coalition Application
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<p>Can someone please take a quick look over my college resume, and critique it or give me advice? I dont feel comfortable just posting it on this site, so just say something and I'll PM it to ya. Thanks :D</p>

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<p>I’ll do it</p>

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<p>okay, we’ll be glad to do so!</p>

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<p>Okay, I sent it to you guys. I honestly have no idea if what I did was along the right lines or not.</p>

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<p>Glad to read it for ya. :)</p>

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<p>ill read it :)</p>

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<p>I’ll read it.</p>

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<p>Sure, pm it over.</p>

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<p>sure, ill take a look at it</p>

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<p>I’ll read it</p>

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<p>ill read it!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it!</p>

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