<p><quote>"It's still going to help you a great deal, however, in the same way that it will guarantee Dbate's acceptance.<\quote></quote></p>
<p>Ppl need to STOP saying that, it is making me nervous.</p>
<p>To:jroc</p>
<p>a)AA is obviously good for us, but I think we should acknowledge it in a subtle way only bc alot of other ppl work really hard and don't get in, so we shouldn't throw it around in an obnoxious way. (not to say that you did)</p>
<p>b) I do not know your class rank so i can not tell how your 3.77 stands at your school, but that is probably the main weakness in your app. I think colleges will like that your ECs have something to do with your ethnicity (like the NAACP stuff) and your community service along with active involvement in your school and awards that tie into community involvement will be an obvious plus. </p>
<p>Since you are a junior I would give you this advice. Alot of admission officer talk about wanting to see an applicants "passion" in fact if you look on the Stanford thread a girl posted a detailed post about what the admission officier who admitted her said about applicants. And unequivocally they want passion. So when you set out to fill out your application focus. You don't have to included everything bc it can end up diluting the things that you are most interested in. For example with what you have presented I would include:</p>
<p>I'll group them to show how you can organize them to show passion:</p>
<p>Minority Involvement:</p>
<p>Founder and president of my school's NAACP club
Secretary of my school's Kappa Alpha Psi fraternity chapter club
Kappa Alpha Psi Fraternity Academic Honorary Award
Dr. Martin Luther King Jr. Certificate of Honor</p>
<p>Community Involvement:
<strong>Government stuff can count as community invovlement bc in theory you should want to be in governement to help ppl</strong>*</p>
<p>Around 200 hours of community
President of my class
President of student govt. association
Model United Nations
Presidents Volunteer Award
President's Silver Volunteer Pin
Ft. Detrick Volunteer of The Year, 2005
Ft. Detrick Volunteer Award, 2006
National Student Leadership Conference Nominee
302nd Signal Battalion Commanders Coin of Excellence
Ft. Detrick Coin of Excellence</p>
<p>Atheltics:</p>
<p>Captain of tennis team
Tennis Varsity Letter and Pin</p>
<p>Things NOT Included:
<a href="I%20would%20exclude%20the%20Ebay%20thing,%20bc%20well%20there%20is%20not%20way%20to%20verify%20and%20profit%20is%20not%20neccessarily%20academic">Took out NHS and spanish bc well it is not something important at all</a></p>
<p>(Academic Awards just show you are smart and get good grades which the Admission commitee can get from your transcript so they do not help at all)
2008 Academic Letter
Presidents Award of Academic Excellence
Presidents Education Award</p>
<p>So from this it makes it seems as if your ECs are more focused as opposed to all over the place. They want ppl to have a passion and with you combo of community and government with also minority involvement I think you can put together a real nice app.
In order to do so I think you should write one essay about why you want to be involved in government to be an inspiration and a pillar in the minority community or something to that effect. The second essay can be about what government PERSONALLY means to you i.e. what you get out of being involved with governmental things and the like, if you have ever visited DC (which if you go to National Leadership Conference you should, I went in seventh grade and it was nice) there is plenty of iconic things to write about. A really good one would be if you have visited the Lincoln memorial and frame your essay about that and how you feel that being a minority has special obligations to be involved in government. </p>
<p>I think that advice helps more than telling you chances.</p>