<p>I took the Diagnostic test in Barron’s PSAT book and I’m still confused on these 4 writing questions (all from the Improving Sentences section):</p>
<li>Having finished the marathon in record-breaking time, [the city awarded him its Citizen’s Outstanding Performance Medal.]
a) orig
b) the city awarded the COPM to him
c) he was awarded the COPM by the city
d) the COPM was awarded to him</li>
<li><p>Ans is (c). But I think all could work.</p></li>
<li><p>[The football team’s winning its first game of the season] excited the student body.
a) orig
c) Having won its first game of the season, the football team</p></li>
<li><p>Ans. is (a). Why? It doesn’t sound clear. I chose (c).</p></li>
<li><p>Anyone interested in the use of computers can learn much [if you have access to] a copy of PC Magazine or of MacUser.
b) if he or she has access to
d) by access to
e) from access to</p></li>
<li><p>Ans. was (a) and I said it was (d). But don’t they all make sense?</p></li>
<li><p>The climax [occurs when he asks who’s] in the closet.
a) orig
b) is when he asks who’s</p></li>
<li><p>Ans. was (a), I chose (b). I think both could work.</p></li>
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<p>Thank you so much for your time!!</p>