Rapidly approaching deadline- feedback appreciated

[jeveux]

<p>Hello there!
The deadline for my college app is a few days away and I, too, would like some feedback. :)
Please post if you're interested in critiquing and I will PM you my essay.</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

[nondairycreamer]

<p>sure, pm me!!!</p>

[jeveux]

<p>:) Thank you</p>