Read and critique my 2 essays and I'll be eternally grateful

College Essays
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<p>These two essays are my official first drafts and I'm in desperate need of someone else's opinion and advice...so long as that someone is reliable.</p>

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<p>Hey PM me! I promise to PM back with help.</p>

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<p>ill read them and provide feedback as long as ur essays aren’t like novels</p>

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<p>pm me. along with the colleges you’re applying to.</p>

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<p>Sure. Include your prompts</p>

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<p>i’ll read them and try and give some good feedback - just pm them over along with the prompts.</p>

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<p>sure, i have access to professional writers in my four-year enrollment at educational center for the arts. pm me and i will give it a quick read! i have a lot of experience in critiquing.</p>

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<p>Pm me</p>

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<p>I can definitely look through it and provide feedback. Just include the prompt/question with them.</p>

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<p>I normally don’t read first drafts, but w/e. I’m bored…</p>

<p>;)</p>

<p>PM me.</p>

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<p>pm me
ill help
tell me the prompts ahead of time though</p>

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<p>Please PM me with the essays and the schools in which you are applying to. Thank you.</p>

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<p>PM it over!</p>

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<p>pm me it and ill help you out</p>

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<p>PM me too.</p>

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<p>If you need another guy to read your essay I’ll be glad to help.</p>

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<p>PM it and I’ll give you a good critique</p>

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<p>I can also try and help if you wish.</p>

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<p>^ ditto
what unis?
whats the prompt?</p>