Read my Common App (prompt 1) essay?

College Essays
1

<p>Feel free to be critical, I want it to be really good by the time I'm completely done with it!</p>

2

<p>I’m available to read the essay. Just PM me. </p>

3

<p>I’ll read it.</p>

4

<p>I will read it, PM me. Would you like to read mine? </p>