Read my Duke Supplement??? help me shorten please!! will read your essays too if you want!

<p>hi just wrote my duke supplement and it is 30 words to long so i was wondering if someone could tell me what to cut/critique the essay?? I will read your essays too if you want!</p>

<p>I’d be happy to read them. I submitted my app like 2 weeks ago.</p>

<p>if you still need help, I’m down!</p>

<p>I would be willing to help if you read mine! PM me</p>

<p>I will read!</p>

Can anybody read mine? I will read yours too. PM me