<p>I wrote my common app essay on how Holden Caulfield influenced my personality and ultimately helped me find my dream career, but it's a little long. I would be glad to send it to someone to help me shorten it / critique it.</p>
<p>you can PM me your essay, I’ll help</p>
<p>i pm’d you. thanks in advance!</p>
<p>anyone else?</p>