Read my essay?

Applying to College Common and Coalition Application
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<p>Hey everyone!</p>

<p>I just finished my common application essay, but I'm not totally satisfied with it yet. English is not my first language, and writing is not my strength. I would really appreciate it if someone would be willing to give me some feedback! </p>

<p>Thank you.</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look at it! :)</p>

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<p>Thank you! Anyone else?</p>

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<p>Bump 10char</p>

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<p>i’ll take a look at it for you</p>