<p>Just pm me if you would like to be an honestly brutal critic. I would really appreciate it. It would be nice for some fresh eyes to look at them, and they are due in a week. They are short, I promise. Thank you sooo much in advance!</p>
<p>PM all the way</p>
<p>ok , i will read it</p>
<p>sure, i'll read it</p>
<p>PM me</p>
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<p>sxsepu, your mailbox is full. Thanks so much, I sent them to all of you. If anyone else would like to critique, I would really appreciate it! thanks.</p>
<p>i will read it</p>
<p>i will................</p>
<p>Thank guys! Anyone else?</p>
<p>Yes, me please!</p>
<p>Thanks again. I've sent them to everyone, plus those who pm'ed me. I really appreciate all the constructive critism. Please let me know if anyone else would be willing.</p>
<p>Ok, I'll read it... just don't forget to send me two pounds of muscovado sugar by friday.</p>