Read my Georgetown 'who are you?' essay

Transfer Students
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<p>I would really appreciate it if you could read my Georgetown transfer essay and give me some constructive feedback and comments.
Here is the prompt:</p>

<p>The Admissions Committee would like to know more about you in your own words. Please submit a brief essay, either autobiographical or creative, which you feel best describes you. If transferring from a four-year institution, please include your reasons for transferring from your present institution. </p>

<p>I took the more creative approach for this essay.
NOTE: I'm attending a community college so I did not have to explain my reason for transferring.</p>

<p>Thanks in advance :)</p>

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<p>i’ll read it. send it to me. i love reading college essays</p>

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<p>I’ll give some pointers and CC on it. PM me the essay.</p>

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<p>i wont mind it… PM me too</p>

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<p>If you want me to give pointers, I’m happy to help. I will be more concentrated on content rather then editing sentece structure and grammar. You can pm me.</p>

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<p>PM me if you want more help!</p>

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<p>Wow, a lot of people like to read.</p>

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<p>Thanks for all the feedback guys!!</p>

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<p>ill take a look and give some feedback.</p>