Read my Northwestern Statement? Harsh but constructive criticism is most welcome!

Applying to College
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<p>Northwestern Statement: What are the unique qualities of Northwestern - and of the specific undergraduate school to which you are applying - that make you want to attend the University? In what ways do you hope to take advantage of the qualities you have identified?</p>

<p>I wrote 2 versions of it and am having trouble with which is better, whether or not they answer both questions, and if they sound dumb, I guess. I will PM you if you are kindly willing to spare some of your time. Thanks in advance! :)</p>

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<p>Btw, I am also willing to read any of your essays in return!</p>

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<p>bump…</p>

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<p>I’ll read it</p>

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<p>I can help you too!</p>