<p>I wrote up a 250 word thing for when I apply for some small scholarships, but the whole "essay" thing is new to me so I really need a lot of constructive criticism. I will be expanding on this for my college essay. I'll PM it to you if you can help! thanks!!</p>
<p>I’m just a high school junior, so maybe my opinion doesn’t mean much, but I’ll read it and give you feedback. :)</p>