Read my SFS essay please?

<p>I just wrote my SFS essay, it's pretty bad because I'm really sick and have a fever, so that's why I haven't written it until now. I've kinda given up hope for Gtown because this seems like a sign, haha, but I would appreciate it if someone could read through it and just tell me if I'm missing anything! And any other comments.
Thank you so much!
Just post here or pm me and I'll send it your way!</p>

<p>PM it to me.</p>

<p>ya can u PM it to me too? thanx</p>

<p>same, even though its past the deadline. thanks</p>

<p>ditto. PM it to me--i'd like to see what you wrote. i applied to SFS too. what was your "projected major"? mine was Science, Tech., & Intl. Affairs b/c i want to go into environmental policy at the international level. :)</p>

<p>ill read it</p>

<p>i'll read it too</p>

<p>HEY!!!!!!!!!! I REALLY im new to this so i dont know much what to do but i really really need major help. i have to write an essay for a college and i have no idea how to sadly its true im really not good at it....</p>

<p>there are two prompt tht has to be 500 words.::</p>

<p>1) complete the following phrase: "i wish i didnt have to..."</p>

<p>2) Is censorship in a classroom ever justified? why or why not?</p>

<p>i really dont know what to do and its dued by sunday:( if theres any way u can help me on it any suggestions and how to start off would be greatly appreciated </p>

<p>thanks for you cooperation:)</p>

<p>estrella: if for some reason you'd like someone else to read it, pm me! also, I jut realized that it says you're from seattle... I'm from WA as well!</p>

<p>gluig18: it would be a good idea to start a thread in the "College Admissions" subforum and ask your question there. This is the Georgetown forum! :)</p>

<p>i'll take a look at it, pm me please!</p>

<p>i'll help too</p>

<p>i can help too</p>

<p>thanks for all the offers guys, but since i submitted it on tuesday (10 min. before the post office closed, haha) i don't really need anyone to read it through for me.</p>

<p>did you guys just want to take a look at it to see what another sfs essay looks like? if so, just let me know and i can post it here or whatever, since the deadline has already passed.</p>

<p>I wouldn't mind reading it just for kicks :p</p>

<p>Oh yeah, same.</p>