Read my Yale supplement and Common App essay?

College Essays
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<p>Hi everyone,</p>

<p>I have been really really anxious about producing a successful Yale supplemental essay, shorts takes and Common App essay. Would anyone be willing to have a look a those/one of those? Possibly comment/criticize? </p>

<p>I'm also actually quite concerned about the possibility of someone to plagiarize my work, so I'd like better people who have already applied to college/go to Yale/are Yale alumni or parents knowledgeable about the process. Send me a private message that includes your email address or post a reply if you're interested. :)</p>

<p>Thanks in advance!</p>

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<p>I will also read it! Feel free to PM it to me whenever!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it! PM me and ill try to PM you some edits by tomorrow when I read it.</p>

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<p>Not applying to yale. Would be happy to read</p>

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<p>I’ll read it :)</p>

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<p>I’ll read it! PM me anytime</p>

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<p>I’ll read it</p>

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<p>I’ll read it! Feel free to PM me.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it. PM me.</p>

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<p>Ill read it pm me</p>

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<p>not applying to yale so you dont have to worry
PM it to me and i can give you some concrete feedback</p>

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<p>I’ll read if you can PM me~</p>

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<p>I can read it for you if you want.</p>

<p>Credentials: Went to harvard, mother of a 2014 applicant applying to top 20 schools.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it!</p>

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<p>im not applying to yale and i will read it!</p>

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<p>ill read it, PM me!</p>