REALLY REALLY rough draft

<p>I just wrote this up tonight, could you please comment so I can figure out if I should scratch it out or try to fix it up.</p>

<p>PM me if you want to help me out</p>

<p>PM me and i'll critique the essay</p>

<p>pm me if you'd like</p>

<p>pm me, thank you very much.</p>