<p>Would any parents be interested in critiquing my UC 600 word essay. It is longer than it needs to be , so I must cut it down as well. Thanks, and I really appreciate it. The last parent help I received was very helpful.</p>
<p>Yes, you can PM me -- but I'm going out for awhile, so I won't reply until rather late tonight.</p>
<p>I think I helped you on the short ones--I'll try again. PM me.</p>