Resume Critique?

<p>Hi there, so I put together my resume and I was hoping someone could look over it? I managed to go over a page and need to know what I should cut out and just to make sure everything makes sense for a resume. </p>

<p>Thanks I appreciate it!</p>

<p>Just post it for everyone to see.</p>

<p>Alright. I made it into a pdf: </p>

<p><a href="http://www.felix-felicis.com/hallo/myresumecritque.pdf%5B/url%5D"&gt;http://www.felix-felicis.com/hallo/myresumecritque.pdf&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p>

<p>It needs work Felix.</p>

<p>Our school counselor just told us to remember to add your gpa, test scores and that type of info onto the resume so the colleges can get a quick glance at you.</p>

<p>well I have my GPA and a few AP scores (I have other AP classes but I don't think they're very relevant).
By test scores do you mean SATs/IIs? I don't have amazing scores for those.</p>

<p>Is there anything missing/need to be changed though?</p>

<p>the font and layout is horrible
and make it one page</p>

<p>well the font is already like 8 so is there anything that seems irrelevant that I could cut out? I kept trying to keep it to a page but it was difficult...</p>

<p>Take out the Objective, put college above high school (unless your high school is more prestigious), put awards below your high school listing and trim it (Honors Student, esp. since you're one with a 3.2) </p>

<p>Take out the "To gain more experience" stuff under Aerie, and the "Refined people skills" thing under the express. *** is "held key responsibility", just say "Edited and corrected articles", and definitely do reverse chronological order, esp. for the positions you held. Make sure to list your most impressive accomplishments first in the job bullets, with quantification, etc.</p>

<p>Make your name bigger, make it prettier, make it one page. </p>

<p>If your scores aren't amazing leave them off. Be sure to mention you haven't actually started college yet, or else the no-GPA will scream "sub-3.0 GPA". </p>

<p>Also, lol.</p>

<p>Alright. will do. Thanks :)</p>

<p>Should I just not have an objective at all?</p>

<p>if u have a cover letter, u dont really need an objective line</p>