<p>Hi! I just finished writing my appeal to Berkeley as a transfer student. I decided to open up to them and be myself. The information in my appeal letter is extremely personal and delicate. Would anyone be willing to peer review it for me? I would prefer to do it over email. Thank you!</p>
<p>Well honestly it sounds good if it’s really personal and delicate. I’ll check it out. I also wrote a very personal letter from my Cal appeal so I can send you mine. </p>