Review my Common Application

Hi. I’ve already submitted some applications, but am now just feeling the overwhelming anxiety of being denied everywhere. My common app essay is over the failure topic. I was hoping someone could also review the extracurricular portion as well as I feel like I am doing it all incorrectly. Let me know if you are willing.

Im sorry. Didn’t realize I placed it in the wrong area. Not really sure how to move it so… XD

Bump

I can read it if you PM me.

I will read it if you like.