Reviewing my Intellectual Vitality essay

<p>Hey guys, I need another pair (or pairs) of eyes to read my essay on intellectual development. Right now, it's around 2400 characters and I need to trim out some information. If anybody would like to take a read or would like to see how I'm writing it, feel free to post here or PM me your email.</p>

<p>Thanks :)</p>

<p>I’ll take a look. I just finished mine.</p>

<p>Okay thanks. I just sent it.</p>

<p>I’ll take a look at yours. I’m a good writer so PM me yours. I’ll give you a good and speedy response.</p>

<p>Thanks. I just sent it.</p>