Second Draft of Personal Statement

College Essays
1

<p>It's prompt two of the UC application. I need someone who can help connect loose thoughts in my essay.</p>

<p>No 2014.</p>

2

<p>you can PM me your essay and i’ll give you some feed back</p>

3

<p>bump 10char</p>

4

<p>you can PM me…i’ll be happy to help!</p>