Hello,
I will apply to Columbia GS for fall 2017. Is there anyone who could review my essay and give me some advice or feedback? If you could, that would be greatly appreciated it.
Thank you in advance,
I’d be happy to, but what I can tell you is that it’s helpful to be specific about the reasons you’d like to attend and draw from some of the information you were give during your visit or the information session and tour. Also, be honest and clear about your objective academically.
Thank you for your reply. Do you mind if I ask you your email address? I will share the link of my draft on google docs with you then.
Feel free to send it here too.
Here is my draft. Please take a look at it and give me tips especially about contents and structure.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lCU10q_xWBOT2nAHJvR9Qz7S782IiApyXOCc2b78Jp0/edit
I do not know why the link was converted to the invalid one…
It seems to be impossible to attach links and paste my whole draft here.
Could you please tell me your email address if you are willing to look over my draft?