<p>I'm just catching up with this thread and haven't read all the way through yet, but I want to respond to mythmom (who I admire :) ). She said:</p>
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I teach at community college, and I totally disagree with the article cited. Struggling to get an AA, and then for most, a BA or BS, is all that educates my students to be understanding and thinking adults.</p>
<p>In many cases both their parents and their high schools have failed them. I teach writing, literature and intellectual history. Many students cannot write a decent sentence when they come into my classes and don't have the clarity to pose or recognize a cogent argument.</p>
<p>Our goal, as a faculty, is to remediate and to stimulate. We have very demanding distribution requirements. I think an understanding of many disciplines is essential to a thinking electorate.
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<p>I am a high school English teacher. I teach sophomore world literature in one of the top public high schools in California (a 900-student magnet technology school where students are accepted with no qualifications other than lottery; we turned away 50% of applicants for this year's freshman class due to lack of space). I work for a school district that has decided that all high school students will be enrolled in college prep or honors English. My mandate is to prepare 100% of my 180 students for four-year college. Our stringent state standards in English were created 10 years ago in order to prepare students for a UC level education (our UCs accept only the top 10% of high school students in the state, while our CSUs accept the top 30%). Last year, 98% of the graduating class enrolled in college, either two- or four-year. All of this is a way of stating that the curriculum I use is rigorous and the expectations of the school, district, parents and teachers are very high. </p>
<p>What is not high is the ability of my students. Like mythmom, I find at least 75% of them cannot string together a few sentences without major errors in syntax, grammar, punctuation and spelling. I have spent my holiday break grading 1,500-word essays combining research from their world history class with literature from our world lit class, and they are uniformly awful. I have given many, many D's. This is with weeks of scaffolding, direct writing instruction, one-on-one advisory, etc... </p>
<p>One student transferred out of the honors program about a month into the school year because it was too difficult; she is now in my class. She wrote this sentence in her paper, buried among many others of the same caliber: </p>
<p>"Therefore, if anyone in their tribe were to show a lack of respect towards the God's it was a major lack of respect that was being shown."</p>
<p>I kid you not.</p>
<p>Here's another:</p>
<p>"This extremely strong was statement made by a manufacturer worker gives insight about what there true concern that the factory owners thought about."</p>
<p>How do I, with 180 students, remediate this kind of writing? And this is from a former honors student. Everyone in her family expects her to get a bachelor's degree, and she most likely will. She eventually will learn from her mistakes because she is motivated. </p>
<p>On the other hand, at least half of my students are not really interested in college or in high school, for that matter. Many simply do not hand in assignments or read the novels. They test proficient or higher on our annual state reading tests, so I know they can at least read, but they don't care to put forth the critical thinking effort that my course requires. It's "hard," and they won't do it. These are the ones who will fill mythmom's class at community college because a string of D's and even F's in high school makes no difference. All one needs to enroll at CC is a high school degree; actually, that's not even necessary, I believe. Some students may be late bloomers who find their way, others will quickly drop out with no job skills and little in the way of preparation. They will think of themselves as losers, and their job prospects without a BA or AA will be pretty dim, especially in a recessionary job market. </p>
<p>The ideal of preparing all students to enter a four-year college is worthy at a certain, simplistic level, yet as the saying goes... you can lead a horse to water, but you can't make it drink. As one of the people holding the horse's head an inch from the *&%# water, it's very, very frustrating. There should be options for those students who are determined not to engage in rigorous work; they are taking up seats in my classroom but they aren't really there. In general, they are nice people and I fear for their future and that the system we have devised is failing them as much as they are failing it.</p>
<p>(This is setting aside the 20% or so of my students who simply cannot do grade level work... those in "resource" who are also in my college prep class, drowning. One young man's mother admitted in an email that she "helped a lot" with her son's paper... she got an A on it, too. She is a principal in our district.)</p>
<p>** P.S. the young lady whose writing I cited above is white and speaks only English. I mention this so that there might be no confusion about her English-speaking status.</p>