<p>Please evaluate my essay. Looking for people hopefully with decent amount of posts (hypocritical, I know sorry XP but I'm paranoid). The topic I'm doing it on is about evaulating a significant experience and its impact.</p>
<p>What I'm worried about is whether I've answered the question adequately and if I have too much frivolous description and not enough imagery. I'll send it tomorrow. Thanks for the help!</p>