Someone to read and critique my personal statements?

Hello, I am a high school senior, new to this site, and in desparate need of as many critiques that I can get on my personal statements. I’m guessing the thing to do is have someone PM me if they are interested? At least I hope.

Anyways, if there is anyone out there willing to read and honestly critique my 2 essays, please message me, I would so greatly appreciate it. :slight_smile:

I’d suggest going to your favorite HS English teacher.