Someone to read common app essay about piano?

Looking for someone to read my essay not really for grammar, but to help me with ideas! My school doesn’t do much to prepare us, so I want to make sure my essay incorporates enough about the way I am as a result of my 11 years playing piano, and highlights some strengths in my personality. I would appreciate it so much, thanks and let me know if you are interested, and I would be happy to reciprocate!

I can take a look if you want

I’ll read it

i’ll read it too. pm me