<p>Hey guys,</p>
<p>I would be really glad if someone of you was willing to read and critique my supplemental essay.
Since I am a German international I would also appreciate it if you could take a look at the grammar and word choice :)</p>
<p>Thanks in advance</p>
<p>schreibfeder</p>
<p>p.s. only established cc users, please :)</p>