Someone willing to read my Questbridge biographical essay

<p>Hi guys! I'm really nervous about my questbridge bio essay and don't know whether I am heading in the right direction or not. Its definitely needs a lot of revision but if any were willing to read it and tell me their early impressions I'd be very grateful!</p>

<p>I would be! Private message me if you’d like to</p>

<p>ill help ya out with both your essays. what are your stats btw</p>

<p>thanks guys!</p>

<p>bump…</p>

<p>stats for those curious:
Rising senior. Indian female. I’m planning on applying to Princeton, Upenn, Columbia, Pennstate(honors college), haverford, swarthmore, university of Pittsburgh, annd drexel with the intention of going pre-med</p>

<p>Here are my stats:</p>

<p>[ *] SAT I:2150(retaking in october)
[ *] ACT:32
[ *] SAT II:740 on chem and physics, 760 on math 2
[ *] Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0):idk about unweighted but i have a 4.77 out of 5
[ *] Rank :1 (but there are like 40 number ones at my school)
[ *] AP :6 total:5 on chem, lang, calcs AB and BC…4 on physics and micro</p>

<p>[ *] Awards: questbridge college prep scholar and ap scholar with distinction i guess…nothing else aside from school awards</p>

<p>[ *] Extracurriculars : started a gender equality club at my school so founder and president
newspaper(editor)
national honor society(secretary)
reading olympics(captain)
spanish honor society
quill and scroll honor society </p>

<p>[ *] Job/Work Experience:i was a paid chem tutor for a few months
[ *] Volunteer/Community service:about 100 at the local library
[ *] Summer Activities: a trip to india( life-changing experience) and volunteering</p>

<p>I’ve read quite a few QB essays via the facebook group and would be happy to read yours and give feedback or editing suggestions if you still need it.</p>

<p>Sure pm it to me, along with your short answers.</p>