SOP for Biomed Sci

Graduate School
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<p>So I'm beginning the first drafts of my SOP of purpose for Biomedical sciences for PhD programs this fall. I have looked at a few books, websites, and talked to a few friends. Unfortunately, each field seems to have a different style that is applicable. My PI is pretty out of touch with the grad school admissions process, so I'm coming to you guys for a little help on some details.</p>

<p>1) How personal should my statement be? I have looked at several schools and many request that I talk about my research experience and interests. I'm curious how much freedom I have to discuss my personal goals and obstacles that I have overcome, without deterring from the question. My personal goals are directly related to a desire to do research, however I'm deciding if i want to bring up a vision disability or not. It doesn't really tie into my research interests, (nor does it effect my ability to do research), however, it has shaped my attitude and personality towards adversity etc. Plus, everyone tells me it's a "hook" and I should use (i'm not so convinced these exist haha). Thoughts?</p>

<p>2) I've have two, relatively unrelated research experiences, however were for a substantial period of time. One in organic synthesis for a year, and my current research/honors thesis in molecular bio (2 years). Right now I'm planning on presenting the points chronologically, and discussing the transition from chem to bio. I'm trying to avoid spending alot of time on the Chem research, due to space constraints, and a general dis-interest in the research compared to my current work. Any suggestions? Do you think a chronological approach would be best?</p>

<p>Specific questions I know, but if anyone has any insight I'd appreciate it. Thanks.</p>

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<p>The best hook for science PhD SOPs is your commitment to research. Period. Med school apps would be a whole different story, but stick to the science for a PhD. </p>

<p>Many (most?) apps will have you line item your research experiences separately from your essay portions, so they’ll be able to see your previous experience. In an SOP, you will want to focus on the portions of your research that were formative for your future goals, so really don’t spend much space on the chem if it doesn’t factor in. </p>

<p>Before apps, I’d worked in three labs for more than a year each, two of them 2+, but only talked about the one that set me on the biomed path. My four-year, intensive leadership development program involvement was condensed to a single line item in the “anything else you want to tell us” box. I completely left out taking care of my disabled mother all through college on top of school and research.</p>

<p>Basically, show them you are a wise investment as a future scientist. Don’t waste valuable space on things that ultimately aren’t relevant.</p>

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<p>Thanks for the input EvoViro. I get the picture now.</p>