<p>Sorry, I’m Late
ACCEPTED-YES!
Objective:
SAT 1: 2390 (800 Math, 800 Writing, 790 English)
ACT: 36: 36E,36M,36R,36S
SAT II: 800Math2 800French, 800 Literature
GPA: Weighted:4.00 unweighted: 4.0
Rank: valedictorian
AP: Latin(5) French(5) USHistory(5) WorldHistory(5) Calculus AB(5)
English Language(5) English Lit(5) US Gov(5)
IB: N/A
Senior Year Course Load: Ap Us Gov, AP English Lit, AP English Lang, Honors Comp Sci 3, AP Physics B, AP French
Major Awards: CTY High Honors(John Hopkins), Outstanding(Best) Delegate(MODEL UN), Intern at a Law firm, Orchestra acceptance, State choir, Winner of Trivia competition with Rival School
Subjective:
ECs: Band(4yrLeadSinger)CrossCountry(4yrCaptain),Tennis(2yrCaptain),State Choir, Therapy dog team with my Australian Shepherd, who just recently,passed away :,(
Volunteer/Community Service: Internship at a Major Law Firm(Bickel and Brewer-part of the 160KPlusClub), 200 hours at a community soup kitchen.
Job/Work Experience: in my last year at High school I sold one condo(worth 1M, and yes, I put my commission in my college fund), I earned my real estate license at the end of the year, I was red-shirted in kindergarten, now 19. Worked at starbucks for 2 years, then bused tables at a very high-end restaurant in NYC(Where I live/am educated).
Summer activities: Worked at a camp in Maine-Timanous, where I used to go when I was younger, state choir, and Working with Gypsy(fore-mentioned aussie:((()
Essays: 10. I have always been good at writing, and language in general, my only flaw, run-on sentences, I wrote about my motivation to pursue excellence and achieve what my family has laid down before me(I used a metaphor frequently, I am making my marks in the path of concrete set before me)
Recs:
Teacher Rec #1:(English and Writing teacher) I have taught W****** for many years, and he has been one of the most enjoyable, intuitive, and excellent students I have taught.
Teacher Rec #2(P.E, teacher, a little aggressive): Along with the rest of the faculty, we will all miss W****** and you better be darn grateful to have him at your school.
Teacher Rec #3:(French and Latin Teacher) W****** has a natural bond with language, he sees words in another language, and in a flash translates them in his head as if he’s known them his whole life.
Coach Rec #4(X-Country) I have been running for 30 years, my doctor says I am as healthy as possible, and could keep running for atleast another 10 years, W****** has been our team captain since he joined the team, even with all my experience, I could never keep up with him, his for is excellent, and he would be a great addition to any team.
Coach Rec #5: (Tennis) W****** is the new Bjorn Borg, ^ basically above.</p>
<p>Other:
State: NY
Country: USA
School Type: SHSAT School- Charter
Ethnicity: White
Gender: Male
Income Bracket: 200k
Hooks: legacy on honors(he was given a memorial page), Star Athlete, CTY High Honors</p>
<p>Reflection:
Strengths: Writing, Language, Work Ethic, sense of humor
Weaknesses: can be sensitive to criticism on my writing
Why you think you were accepted/waitlisted/rejected: My GPA, Rank, ECs, Recs, Awards, Legacy,etc.(read ^)
Where else were you accepted/waitlisted/rejected: Accepted: Upenn, Yale, Harvard, UCLA, and Dartmouth.(Stanford is my dream school and offered me a Full scholarship, Harvard-Full, Yale 1/2 Upenn-Full, UCLA-1/4 Dartmouth-None-Sorry, but screw you Dartmouth)</p>
<p>General Comments:
I will use this section to vent my excitement and tell you all my life story, I have always wanted to be a Lawyer, my father heard this on his death bed as he died from cancer 9 years ago, he told me to always reach higher than told, right before they made me leave to give him his last anesthesia. Once I heard those inspiring words, I always tried my hardest, I fought countless times to achieve higher than anyone else, I did not stop studying, making Straight As or reaching anywhere under 2 times my capability, I did not care that I was overworked, I only needed to do what I had to, to achieve what my dad had, I made perfect scores on ERBs, ISEEs,SSATs SHSATs, and ACTs(unfortunately, not SATs.) I got into A charter school, not a prep, so I could boost my chances for a top school, and save my mom’s money for college + grad school. Now that I will see the class of 2018 this fall, I know that I do not have many troubles ahead of me until I can reach the top of the shelf.</p>