Stanford Intellectual Vitality Question?

For my Stanford intellectual vitality essay, I wrote about a law field trip my class took to the local jail and how it changed my perspective and further pushed my desire to be a lawyer. Does this sound intellectual enough? I’m not sure if it quite matches the prompt

I wonder what the wide receivers write about?

@makennacompton They write about how people assume they’re all stupid and make jokes about them, when in reality they’re very smart.

@Elainekm, we cannot tell you what is intellectual vitality and what is not. if you think the trip developed you intellectually and changed the way you think, reason, and perceive for the better, then write about it.