Stanford Roommate Essay? Would this even be acceptable?

Applying to College
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<p>Would anyone be willing to read an essay that I've just written and critique? I like it, but am not sure whether it's acceptable and would like some opinions. Please PM me. I'd appreciate any help and I promise that it won't take too long to read or bore you to tears. If it sucks and you couldn't finish reading it, that would be useful information also. Thanks in advance!</p>

<p>-Christina</p>

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<p>Hey,
i'll help out and critique it if ya want.</p>

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<p>i'll try to censure ...</p>

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<p>hey, im applying to stanford & i would definetly like to look at what other people are doing. email me at <a href="mailto:peta_hypocrites@yahoo.com">peta_hypocrites@yahoo.com</a> Could you proofread mine also?</p>

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<p>Either one of you, i'd love to read your essays. Feel free to PM me...</p>

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<p>me too, this sounds interesting</p>

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<p>Yeah me too, love to do it</p>